Standing on a chair
trying to reach the radio
Appears angry and in a rush
She reaches the radio
and starts to change between it's channels.
Then looks at the clock on her hand
and starts to hit the radio
while mumbling some ugly words.
Finely she finds the channel,
It is the music she likes,
runs out to call the friends,
to listen with her.
You ignorant of what you see
Houses appears dormant
until the evening.
Families get together for this
sound to sing and dance.
Fantasying, imagining the dresses
of the female singer and how elegant
the musicians would look like.
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love it,
ReplyDeletepowerful message sent, well penned.
vivid imagery of stuff.
ReplyDeletewell done,
It is like traveling back in time. Nice writing.
ReplyDeleteI find something very melancholy in this.
ReplyDeleteLarry
I am wondering if the "she" of the first three stanzas is the female singer of the final one.
ReplyDeletenice one shadia.. well done! my thursday! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/03/how-i-wish/
ReplyDeleteVivid and written beautifully.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.html
this is like a fairy tale and how we can travel back in time and see this lovely scene such a great job you did on this it is really beautiful.
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/
Music is powerful, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteLike this very much. Wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
this is fairly magical....families should do this more often...gather to dance and imagine...
ReplyDeletetrue, one cannot always know what lies behind closed doors.
ReplyDeleteImagination in this one--a feeling of perhaps "outside looking in".
ReplyDeleteLike above, this feels melancholy to me. Lovely wording.
ReplyDeleteWell done, nice writing indeed :)
ReplyDeleteListening to the radio, with no visual stimuli, your imagination soars.
ReplyDeleteVery nice recalls the days of radio when we used or imaginations so much more.
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