Standing on a chair 
trying to reach the radio 
Appears angry and in a rush

She reaches the radio
and starts to change between it's channels. 
Then looks at the clock on her hand 
and starts to hit the radio 
while mumbling some ugly words. 

Finely she finds the channel, 
It is the music she likes, 
runs out to call the friends, 
to listen with her.

You ignorant of what you see 
Houses appears dormant 
until the evening. 
Families get together for this 
sound to sing and dance. 

Fantasying, imagining the dresses 
of the female singer and how elegant
 the musicians would look like.

  © 2010-2011

23 kommentarer:

The Orange Tree said...

love it,

powerful message sent, well penned.

Morning said...

vivid imagery of stuff.
well done,

S. Sharp said...

Dear The orange tree ang Morning

Thanks and its really good to see you here


Kristen Haskell said...

It is like traveling back in time. Nice writing.

Larry, aka The Kid and The Old Goat said...

I find something very melancholy in this.


Kathy Bischoping said...

I am wondering if the "she" of the first three stanzas is the female singer of the final one.

fiveloaf said...

nice one shadia.. well done! my thursday!

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Vivid and written beautifully.

Here is my entry:

Ann LeFlore said...

this is like a fairy tale and how we can travel back in time and see this lovely scene such a great job you did on this it is really beautiful.

Classic NYer said...

Music is powerful, isn't it?

S. Sharp said...

Thank you everyone for visiting.

@Kathy Bischoping - Yes she is the star.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Like this very much. Wonderful imagery.


S. Sharp said...

Thank you Melanie - Nice to see you here ;)

Brian Miller said...

this is fairly magical....families should do this more often...gather to dance and imagine...

S. Sharp said...

Yes families should gather more often listening to music not watching xFactor because imagination must be part of the evening.

Thank you Brian;)

shonejai said...

true, one cannot always know what lies behind closed doors.

S. Sharp said...

Totally agree with you.

Thank you shonijai.

bodhirose said...

Imagination in this one--a feeling of perhaps "outside looking in".

S. Sharp said...

Yes Bodhirose .. Thank you ;)

halfwaybetweenthegutter said...

Like above, this feels melancholy to me. Lovely wording.

jeaniemcbain said...

Well done, nice writing indeed :)

shail said...

Listening to the radio, with no visual stimuli, your imagination soars.

Jacqui Binford-Bell said...

Very nice recalls the days of radio when we used or imaginations so much more.

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