About Shadiatique





My work, is disturbing?! 
And the story always travels in the jungle. 
Like a strong horse in his dominated area! 
Like a dowry when rebellion against the dominator. 

Like hair, who dances with the clouds 
Like me, and the wind in the silence 
Like gossips, when the wind had freed. 



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 © 2010-2014

12 comments:

  1. this is an intriguing poem. I cannot grasp its meaning overall but the last two lines sound like that when you (and the wind) were freed people noticed and started talking about it. Thanks for linking up with dVerse. Hope to see you again soon!

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  2. nice comparisons...hair dancing in clouds...a silent wind...and gossips when freed...def intriguing

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  3. I like " like me, and the wind in silence..." nice lines.

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  4. This is a great poem. I really like the last two lines

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  5. Very good take bringing in contrasts of events to the fore. Beautiful poem!

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  6. Intriguing piece... muttles a bit of my mind, seeking clarity in the silence, voices in the wind.

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  7. I really like your writing!

    I hope you are having great dreams today in Denmark, far from your home of love and injury.

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  8. This poem is actually a dream of how I want my words/work to travel from here to every place. I just wanted to let everyone read my words and remember me through my lines.

    I'm very speechless though, you let me feel that my dream is not that far hehe. Thanks to you all for your kind words. Sorry for the late reply, I was dreaming ;)

    ShadiatiQue or S

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  9. Africa, your first love, how sweet. I shall think of Africa to make your sidebar button for my site tonight.

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  10. Jannie thanks for the cool sidebar button. ;)

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  11. Hey there - just tuned in and became your newest follower. Come on over to http://www.thatssojacob.wordpress.com if you want to return the favor, thanks! :)

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