September 13, 2011

Almost forgiving



Always comes to me
Begging .. kneeling infront of me

Raising his hands to me
Flowers had covered his eyes
Eyes were filled with tears

Kneeling in front of me
Raising flowers to me
And almost were choking in the words

Fine and kind words
Supplicant and compassionate words
Words were choking ... and throttling his voice
While asking for forgiveness!

I would forgive you my beloved
 if you just give me my heart back
& leave me in this tragedy



 Shared with: d’Verse Poets’ Pub   
© 2010-2011

5 comments:

  1. oy nice closing lines...if you would give me my heart back...so final...nicely penned though....

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  2. Almost but not quite.. that is tough. Though if one forgives, it might not be a tragedy ~

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  3. he better be good to you or I'll come over and kick his ass!

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  4. I love your closing asking for your heart back so you can forgive him
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/13/a-new-life-begins/

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  5. I agree with Jannie! I don't think he want's to give your heart back, though. I certainly wouldn't.. Lovely poem.... Miss Social Couch! LOL! I saw that on your About page and I might have to steal that from you......!

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