Always comes to me
Begging .. kneeling infront of me
Raising his hands to me
Flowers had covered his eyes
Eyes were filled with tears
Eyes were filled with tears
Kneeling in front of me
Raising flowers to me
And almost were choking in the words
Fine and kind words
Supplicant and compassionate words
Words were choking ... and throttling his voice
While asking for forgiveness!
I would forgive you my beloved
if you just give me my heart back
& leave me in this tragedy
& leave me in this tragedy
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oy nice closing lines...if you would give me my heart back...so final...nicely penned though....
ReplyDeleteAlmost but not quite.. that is tough. Though if one forgives, it might not be a tragedy ~
ReplyDeletehe better be good to you or I'll come over and kick his ass!
ReplyDeleteI love your closing asking for your heart back so you can forgive him
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I agree with Jannie! I don't think he want's to give your heart back, though. I certainly wouldn't.. Lovely poem.... Miss Social Couch! LOL! I saw that on your About page and I might have to steal that from you......!
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