I've been told
the finest dress a woman
can wear is the dress
of Shyness and modesty
It's pure and elegant they say.
My dear,
Whisperers of my humble modesty
are dedicated to you, without shame
Only shyness, I feel when I'm with you.
Maybe when I experience a certain
moment with you.
Is it my purity or is't how you easily
can lead me to a feeling that invites
every confused heart with his muse
to a love ceremony.
With humble music, I dance with timidity
around the smiling faces,
While I'm dressed
with my finest dress.
Very sweet and melodic write. I like it.
ReplyDeletehttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/
These words dance to the music of falling in love.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
And this purple font is exquisite on my eyes
Awww, love it! Really beautiful sis!
ReplyDeletedelicious words, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLove "With humble music, I dance with timidity" :)
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteLove is such a beautiful emotion that it can make us do just about anything.
Love the 4th stanza.
Nicely done!
Your Song Of Love
a princess piece,
ReplyDeletewell penned.
this is a very lovely sweet write so well done
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/
nicely structured, nicely worded, and nice synecdoche w/the dress. this poem represents a 'pure' uncorrupted soul…very rare these days. a princess.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing.