The dead one
That still dreams about existence
Complains about the dark grave
Weakness in bones
Vacancy in the heart
Recall the passing courage
Where the passion date
I have been told
The dead one was brave
Only braves die
and suffer in graves,
And from the scary tales of death above
Ashamed, if I visit your grave
Afraid, if you ask me that question.
I know you, you cannot rest
Untill the people change
You will in every visit
Ask me the question
Any changes in our situation?
Ah, still there is humiliation
Many caught up in your death.
Obituary published with love
Asking, where is now the home of
the brave one?
Affected, Unlikely .. feel outcasted
Sad, unlucky and now buried
Derived strength from the entombed
echo of the whining beloved.
Written first time in ©2010
Published at ShadiatiQue © 2012
wow this is a heavy piece...it speaks of loss and dealing with its aftermath....and the lost on still visiting...and asking questions...all too real poem...
ReplyDeletePotent and haunting, I reread and reread again.
ReplyDeleteI'll go with Anna on that! Haunting and packs a lot of energy in it! lovely!
ReplyDeletevery heavy but well done my old acquaintance? my rally.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletepowerful word flow.
ReplyDeleteFantastic beat ! I would like to apprentice at the
ReplyDeletesame time as you amend your site, how could i subscribe for a weblog
site? The account helped me a acceptable deal.
I were a little bit acquainted of this your broadcast offered vibrant clear concept
Here is my blog post - instagram followers
ReplyDeletemу blog post - payday loans
Also see my website > payday loan,
ReplyDeleteVisіt my ρage ... payday loan online
Feel free to visit my page :: payday loan,
Very energetic blog, I loved that a lot. Will there be a part 2?
ReplyDeleteHere is my blog - pregnancyhelper.in