November 02, 2010

Unsteady and so Fickle

Unsteady , and so Fickle
Changing whenever he wants
Without any problems.

Everything in him is so Shaky
and fluky -There is always
 too much of "him" in him
That makes him so variable
Unsteady even when we dance.

His ways of rushing
into life, makes him very impulsive
no regrets, nothing can stop him
He can force me to be like him
impulsive and mutable

Among others expectations
we still go on and on!
No harm would he ever cost me

Just confusing days and situations
I'm casual, but he is spontaneous
I would not match his glib
and point of views.

© 2010


  1. letting you know Rally poetry awards posted, hope that you check it out,

    link a poem to Jingle poetry potluck if you can,
    i value your support.

  2. welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!

    awards will be given upon participation this week.

  3. Dear Jingle thank you for this great opportunity and I will for sure participate.

    Thank you


  4. your words, your image, they are perfect match.
    way to go,
    you are princess poet,
    Love to have you in.
    Happy Wednesday.



    awards 4 u...

  6. Reminds me of someone I know...
    "His ways of rushing
    into life, makes him very impulsive"
    I know very much how it feels to deal with this. Beautiful poem!

  7. great poem. the structure and the use of words like fluky really worked with the whole idea of the unsteady dance. nice job!

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