The Sun of thanklessness
And there from afar he stood
stricken, injured by motionlessness
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Thirsted after the waters of paradise
Seeking the silk dress of paradise
Seeking the silk dress of paradise
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He once told me
with eyes full of misery
That moments of happiness
Always tense his nerves
Troubles his disturbed conscience
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Smiles and giggles of others
always exhausted his good intentions
He never envied joys of others
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Smiles and giggles of others
always exhausted his good intentions
He never envied joys of others
Maybe a small suggestion to be jealous
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The dances with hugs
Given and taken tenderness
Fresh water, From a nearby river
Was the last seen moments of happiness
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© 2010
So glad you stopped by my blog so I could discover yours. I marvel at your ability to create beautiful poetry in English.
ReplyDelete"Seeking the silk dress of paradise..." Nice image.
Victoria
nice. sounds like he journeyed but missed the now...you do paint an intriguing picture...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteStriking piece, emotional without being bathetic, maintaining that urban edge that permeates your site. Solid work.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece. I can so relate to both contained in this piece. Sometimes at the same time. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender
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ReplyDeleteIts so nice and I loved reading it.. thanks for sharing...
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Brilliant work. Just...no other words. I love this piece. <3
ReplyDeleteEnvy would always make one miserable!
ReplyDeletea wonderful one shot share...welcome aboard
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