October 17, 2010

Moments of happiness



From afar appeared
The Sun of thanklessness
And there from afar he stood 
stricken, injured by motionlessness
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Thirsted after the waters of paradise
Seeking the silk dress of paradise
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He once told me
with eyes full of misery
That moments of happiness
Always tense his nerves
Troubles his disturbed conscience
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Smiles and giggles of others
always exhausted his good intentions
He never envied joys of others
Maybe a small suggestion to be jealous
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The dances with hugs  
Given and taken tenderness
Fresh water, From a nearby river
Was the last seen moments of happiness

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© 2010



12 comments:

  1. So glad you stopped by my blog so I could discover yours. I marvel at your ability to create beautiful poetry in English.
    "Seeking the silk dress of paradise..." Nice image.
    Victoria

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  2. Hi Victoria ... I'm really happy that your are commenting on my modest words. Thank you for your visit.

    S.

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  3. nice. sounds like he journeyed but missed the now...you do paint an intriguing picture...nice one shot!

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  4. Striking piece, emotional without being bathetic, maintaining that urban edge that permeates your site. Solid work.

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  5. This is a great piece. I can so relate to both contained in this piece. Sometimes at the same time. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender

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  6. Dear S

    Its so nice and I loved reading it.. thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  7. Brilliant work. Just...no other words. I love this piece. <3

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  8. Envy would always make one miserable!

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  9. a wonderful one shot share...welcome aboard

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  10. I'm more than thankful for your kind and sweet replies. These words will give me a strong driving towards new lines and poems.

    Thank you so much ^^, <3

    S.

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  11. شادياتيك
    جامدة يابنتي

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  12. شادياتيك
    جامدة يابنتي

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