November 08, 2014

Whisper - Fair Love

In whisper & in French she said,
as if she's afraid of my reaction.

My entire life, all I wanted
was to earn her trust.
Today while holding her hand
she is afraid of my reaction.

As her eyes shines, as I make sure
to tell her about my Love.
I scare her, not my intentions

My soul listens to her
thus my groaning life
I know, I know
I put myself in these situations

But don't ask how I pray
for more of her love
My impulsive pulse
will beg me to repeat,
 My entire life, all I wanted
was to earn her trust.
My humble emotions.

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  1. what an interesting journey love is...both so full of desire and yet someone has to take that risk and say it...and then wait for the reaction...afraid of what comes next....but that is the only way forward with love.

  2. Oh! It is never easy to express feelings when you do not know where exactly the other person stands. A risk worth taking, I would say.

  3. "My impulsive pulse" ... what a great line. The more you care about someone the more honest you should be with them.

  4. Well! This brought tears to my eyes, I am smack dab in the middle of said journey. Excellent write!

  5. Thanks for visiting and comenting .. I feel very honored