Remind me - Becoming Relentless



If you find my heart cold
like the winter.
Heedless of your love signals 
Remind me of your existence in life

Poke or punch me 
Through yourself on me
Maybe I'm asleep
Or I would lose my feelings

Remind me 
Because I can be relentless
Or love will no more interest me
Remind me of you



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Elizena said...

This made me a bit sad for some reason. There's so much beauty and love out there, especially with someone who loves you. Never wait
for the one you love and who loves you, to hug you. Hug, love and cuddle every chance you get. If you wait to be touched before you can experience the riches of life and love it'll never happen.
Actually, this is what I wanted to tell your character. LOL!

This was well written and brought a picture to mind of a man sitting in complete and total cold and grayness. He'd shut himself away and was kind of like a prince waiting for his princess to come and rescue him from loneliness, but a loneliness that he'd imposed on himself.

I'm not sure I've explained myself well, but that's came into my mind as I read this. Well done and be blessed!

http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/09/hearts-harvest.html

Aya Gugles Wilson said...

very honest thoughts.

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