The Green Balcony -
A Heart beating with Love
Laughing and raising his Glass
Heedless of questions of feelings
Asking only about his journey.
Happy heart took me tirelessly
to build me a green balcony
Greenness that beats with a song
A song that touches my sadness
Building in my broken conscience
Fixing in my disturbed intentions
Hiding from me, my bad memories
Building in my broken conscience
Fixing in my disturbed intentions
Hiding from me, my bad memories
Then forces my sorrow to flee
Escape away from me
Only tenderness and solved problems
Stay untouched ... -
Only tenderness and solved problems
Stay untouched ... -
To let me again raise my glass
With proud and happiness
With proud and happiness
....
Happy New Year everybody.
I hope that the new year brings a smile to you and your loved one's faces.
Happy New Year everybody.
I hope that the new year brings a smile to you and your loved one's faces.
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raise it high :) stay happy, enjoy the rally!!!
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My glass is raised to you! A wonderful New Years poem! Happy New Year to you and yours!
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a toast to you.
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Cheers.
it's good if tenderness stays untouched, unless it's the kind of tenderness the doctors talk about, like they squeeze your liver and say "is that tender there?"
ReplyDeletethe choice of green hints at growth, fertility :) nice metaphor
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So lovely is the color green . . . a color of renewal that springs forth hope. Lovely poem!
ReplyDeletemay love find you, smiles.
ReplyDeletesmiles:) Happy New Year and may it be full of blessings and New memories of joy!
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Wonderfull crafted poem, green is a wonderful warm color.
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