April 30, 2011

A kiss from hell


As the rumor tells us,
There were a village,
known for their high palm trees.

Only well motivated young people
would bother themselfs to climb the trees,
and enjoy the delicious dates.

With the impulsive youths hearts
We can take sheets to cover the trees

To watch the village from above
to watch the old farmer in the fields
While he kisses the wife, a kiss from hell.




© 2010
Indsendt af kl.
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5 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 3, 2011 at 9:56 PM

    Glad to see you in,
    the imagery is stunning on this one.
    smiles.

    A++

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  2. AnonymousMay 3, 2011 at 11:20 PM

    wow! the ending blew me away! so unexpected! nice!

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  3. ShadiatiqueMay 4, 2011 at 1:03 AM

    Hello @Jingle
    Thanks and good to see you here ;)


    @Lunawitch15
    I'm so happy for your comment, and that you liked my lines. ;)

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  4. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    I can imagine it -- interesting! :)

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  5. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 3:48 AM

    Fantastic imagery this piece provokes, and the ending, loved it!

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