December 23, 2010

Meeting in dreams

When I sleep!
I always find you,
Waiting in my dreams,
To kiss me, where you
prepared for our meeting.

Then I turn from you
While rolling in the bed
Feeling the tears
That wet my pillow.

It bothers me
That you still belong to
my universe.
Your main concern
is to be my illusions!

My tears rejects the oppression
And sadness in dreams
Your injustice in my dreams
visit me, make me cry
And your proud smile
Shows your real YOU!

I need to burry you for a few moment
This distress, and all your tyranny
of the mighty rebel of yous, let't
Stay away from me!

Give me place to research
Freedom in my heart
To lift the injustice
on my shoulders.


© 23.12.2010


  1. keep dreaming,

    your words are magical,
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  3. Deep, heartfelt poem that mixes dream sensation with awakening reality. "Your main concern is to be my illusions!" Also, a great image to accompany your poem.

  4. i like the mix of dream and reality and the deep and heartfelt emotions you express with your words

  5. i seems a dream at times but one that has gone beyond...perhaps crushing the potential of what might be...

  6. Nice One Shot, so full of emotion!

  7. love the part about illusions!