Let's draw around us
a world that's so brat
and unbelievably sad
as it would clear the sky
for our only dance.
Our sadness and sorrow
will let our love grow
Over the limits of the Chandelier
When we collaps, we will enter
a deep silence in the heart
Where we will improvise tears
Improvisations in thousand ways
The more weeping episodes we have
The more we will increas our
love's glance through the Chandelier
We will ask the waiter
To fill the cups of wailing
We will cry and tear.
If the wail takes long
It will be the finest flow
better than the Giggles of fools.
Weep out with me
The tragedy of life
From the depth of my heart
Let the sad tune
be our new ideology
Let us cry without interruption
© 2010
An old poem shared with dVerse poets #OLN
We will ask the waiter
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...excellent..!!!
This is very sad & I thought of the "professional" weepers during the funerals ~
ReplyDeleteExcellent write :)
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of "the weeping song" by Nick Cave and the bad seeds... a wonderful lament.
ReplyDeleteNever thought there can be an art of weeping - Let us cry without interruption, this was so powerful.
ReplyDeleteA good cry always does one good. I just had one for the past week. This was indeed a powerful poem. Welcome to d'Verse! spencer is Kanzensakura.
ReplyDeleteIt never entered my mind that there would be an art to weeping, but sure, why not? What an interesting poem...maybe it would be helpful to have someone to weep along with and share the burden.
ReplyDeleteSmiles.. tears.. gift
ReplyDeletesaving Grace..
danCinG
sWinGinG
through crystal
chandelier
fLiGhts
GRace
LiGht's
LoVe..:)
This makes me think of Jesus on the cross. so sad but lovely.
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