About Shadiatique





My work, is disturbing?! 
And the story always travels in the jungle. 
Like a strong horse in his dominated area! 
Like a dowry when rebellion against the dominator. 

Like hair, who dances with the clouds 
Like me, and the wind in the silence 
Like gossips, when the wind had freed. 



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 © 2010-2014

10 comments:

  1. SheilaSeptember 1, 2011 at 1:40 AM

    this is an intriguing poem. I cannot grasp its meaning overall but the last two lines sound like that when you (and the wind) were freed people noticed and started talking about it. Thanks for linking up with dVerse. Hope to see you again soon!

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  2. Brian MillerSeptember 1, 2011 at 3:12 AM

    nice comparisons...hair dancing in clouds...a silent wind...and gossips when freed...def intriguing

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  3. ayalaSeptember 1, 2011 at 3:50 AM

    I like " like me, and the wind in silence..." nice lines.

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  4. Ann LeFloreSeptember 1, 2011 at 4:31 AM

    This is a great poem. I really like the last two lines

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  5. kaykualaSeptember 1, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    Very good take bringing in contrasts of events to the fore. Beautiful poem!

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  6. ReflectionsSeptember 1, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    Intriguing piece... muttles a bit of my mind, seeking clarity in the silence, voices in the wind.

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 1, 2011 at 8:59 PM

    playful.

    :)

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  8. Jannie FunsterSeptember 1, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    I really like your writing!

    I hope you are having great dreams today in Denmark, far from your home of love and injury.

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  9. Jannie FunsterJuly 5, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    Africa, your first love, how sweet. I shall think of Africa to make your sidebar button for my site tonight.

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  10. The Daily DramaturgApril 8, 2014 at 7:35 AM

    Hey there - just tuned in and became your newest follower. Come on over to http://www.thatssojacob.wordpress.com if you want to return the favor, thanks! :)

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