tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post8016902914067479549..comments2023-09-20T15:42:23.458+02:00Comments on - Shadiatique -: Absent Shadiatiquehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14081852070984670290noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-90448420202223037572014-04-09T01:58:49.619+02:002014-04-09T01:58:49.619+02:00Those windows --- haunting and well-described. Those windows --- haunting and well-described. Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-85663457233821265182014-04-05T14:47:21.358+02:002014-04-05T14:47:21.358+02:00the window images; very sad indeed and in such con...the window images; very sad indeed and in such contrast to the ones sweating and building futures<br /><br /><br />much love,,,Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-5821853142377333482014-04-04T16:30:12.504+02:002014-04-04T16:30:12.504+02:00Great images! Loved that line "windows becom...Great images! Loved that line "windows become absent faces" :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-24168534746133534092014-04-04T13:33:37.615+02:002014-04-04T13:33:37.615+02:00So vivid... & I really like the role of faces ...So vivid... & I really like the role of faces in this poem.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-2509008430570956802014-04-03T11:37:58.651+02:002014-04-03T11:37:58.651+02:00the last three lines have an air of deep sadness a...the last three lines have an air of deep sadness about them...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-41019482249105134072014-04-03T07:23:15.116+02:002014-04-03T07:23:15.116+02:00There is a power in building or setting ourselves ...There is a power in building or setting ourselves to the task,it almost seems to be the story of two covenants. Lots here and very thought provoking.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-72556290151192078112014-04-03T06:47:22.852+02:002014-04-03T06:47:22.852+02:00Your poem made me think of a dictator, or a dictat...Your poem made me think of a dictator, or a dictator's child. Someone who has been set aside from the rest of the population and watch ithers live from afar. Very powerful!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-62333904902375307702014-04-03T02:08:32.033+02:002014-04-03T02:08:32.033+02:00This poem seems quite chilling to me. The last st...This poem seems quite chilling to me. The last stanza especially with the voices and windows becoming absent faces....staring. Thanks for taking part in Poetry Jam.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3771887317808033764.post-11061936959190136992014-04-03T01:49:33.711+02:002014-04-03T01:49:33.711+02:00kinda scary those faces in the window.
i would def...kinda scary those faces in the window.<br />i would def much rather be out under the sun<br />listening to the builders songs....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com